Writing Day 2: Revising - Taking Away

Introduction

Welcome back writers! Today we are going to be revising our writing by taking out unnecessary information. Let’s get started! 

 

 Mini Lesson

 

 

Activity

In Your Notebook: 

Refer back to slide 10 and revise your writing about your summer day by taking out any information that is not needed. REvise at least two sentences. 

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