Writing Day 1: Revising - Adding Details

Introduction

Welcome back writers! Today we are going to be revising our writing by adding details. We are going to look through our draft and think about what we want to add for our reader. Let’s get started! 

 

 Mini Lesson

 

 

Activity

In Your Notebook: 

Refer back to slide 9 and revise your writing about your summer day by adding details throughout your writing. Revise at least two sentences. 

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